"Free verse"
Spear fishing
By: Austin
I walk in the water,
The water is cold,
I see a fish,
Then I aim,
throw the spear,
miss,
The fish swims away,
Then I try again,
There is a trout,
It’s big,
I throw the spear,
and hit it,
I go to grab the fish,
But then,
I speared two fish at the same time.
Then I see a catfish,
I walk as slow as I can about 5 feet from the fish,
The spear slices it’s skin,
Then I go home with 3 fish on the spear,
And the fish were tasty
"Free verse"
Fishing
By:Austin
I bait my hook
Then I reach back
Cast
The line falls into the water
I leave the line sit
Then I feel a tug
Is it a fish,
Is it
Is it
I real my line in
It is hard to reel in
It is a turtle
I try to get it off the hook
Ouch,
It bites me
Then I get the turtle off
It swims away
I am bleeding
My finger hurts from the pain.
"Free verse"
Hunting
By: Austin
I load my 22 gauge
I see an animal
It is big
It is a deer
Then I aim
BANG,
I hit the deer
But it is only wounded
I run over wear it is laying down
I get out my gun and shoot it so it doesn’t get hurt.
"Free verse"
The lost baggage.
By:Austin
The day has finally came
I jump in the car
But where is my bags
I run back in the house they are nowhere
I run outside my bags are not there either
where are they I think to myself
then I remember something
I left my bags at grandma’s house
I run there grab them and away we go.
"Concrete/Picture Poem"
Burgers
By: Austin
I love burgers so much they are delicious
With lettuce Lettuce Lettuce
The cheese is so delicious
The meat is being cooked on a grill yum
The bun has sesame seeds on the burgers
"Concrete/Picture Poem"
Burger
By:Austin
Bun Bun Bun Bun Bun
Meat Meat Meat
Ketchup Ketchup
Meat Meat Meat
Bun Bun Bun Bun Bun
"Acrostic Poem"
swimming
By: Austin
Swim
Miles
Into
Large
Enemies
Comments (17)
Brady F said
at 12:09 pm on May 21, 2015
I like how a lot of yours are about hunting.
Mike B said
at 12:12 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your smile poem because its cool.
Joel G said
at 12:15 pm on May 21, 2015
I like how in your hamburger poem you describe how everything taste and if it is good or not.
Trey D said
at 12:16 pm on May 21, 2015
like your Burgers poem because it has a good ring to it.
Tristen M said
at 12:18 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your fish poem because you got 3 fish.
Payten L said
at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your first burger poem and that you explain what you like about each ingredient on the burger.
Emily J. said
at 12:20 pm on May 21, 2015
i like your poem swimming because its funny
Lilly M said
at 12:23 pm on May 21, 2015
i agree with emily it is funny!
ashia g said
at 12:23 pm on May 21, 2015
I like you burger one beacsue it is what you would probly put on a hamburger.
KarleeC said
at 12:25 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your lost baggage because it describes how people forget.
Sage M said
at 12:28 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your poem "Lost Baggage" because it's something a lot of people have to deal with.
Mia g said
at 12:31 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your first Burgers poem because it describes why you like them.
austin K said
at 12:33 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked the fishing one because fishing is really fun.
Dylan D said
at 12:38 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your poem about "Lost Baggage" because everyone forgets stuff.
Claire H said
at 9:39 am on May 22, 2015
I like "Swimming" the best because you came up with meaningful words to describe swimming.
Kenny G. said
at 10:40 am on May 22, 2015
I like your swimming, because you did a good job describing how you feel.
Leinissa T said
at 10:20 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your "Free verse"Hunting. Like when you use the action and using bang to pop.
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