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Page history last edited by Austin M. 8 years, 11 months ago

"Free verse"

Spear fishing

By: Austin

 

I walk in the water,

The water is cold,

I see a fish,

Then I aim,

throw the spear,

miss,

The fish swims away,

Then I try again,

There is a trout,

It’s big,

I throw the spear,

and hit it,

I go to grab the fish,

But then,

I speared two fish at the same time.

Then I see a catfish,

I walk as slow as I can about 5 feet from the fish,

The spear slices it’s skin,

Then I go home with 3 fish on the spear,

And the fish were tasty

 

"Free verse"

Fishing

By:Austin

 

I bait my hook

Then I reach back

Cast

The line falls into the water

I leave the line sit

Then I feel a tug

Is it a fish,

Is it

Is it

I real my line in

It is hard to reel in

It is a turtle

I try to get it off the hook

Ouch,

It bites me

Then I get the turtle off

It swims away

I am bleeding

My finger hurts from the pain.

 

"Free verse"

Hunting

By: Austin

 

I load my 22 gauge

I see an animal

It is big

It is a deer

Then I aim

BANG,

I hit the deer

But it is only wounded

I run over wear it is laying down

I get out my gun and shoot it so it doesn’t get hurt.

 

"Free verse"

The lost baggage.

By:Austin

 

The day has finally came

I jump in the car

But where is my bags

I run back in the house they are nowhere

I run outside my bags are not there either

where are they I think to myself

then I remember something

I left my bags at grandma’s house

I run there grab them and away we go.

 

"Concrete/Picture Poem"

Burgers

By: Austin

     I love burgers so much they are delicious

        With lettuce Lettuce Lettuce

          The cheese is so delicious 

    The meat is being cooked on a grill yum

The bun has sesame seeds on the burgers

 

"Concrete/Picture Poem" 

Burger

By:Austin  

Bun Bun Bun Bun Bun

   Meat  Meat Meat  

   Ketchup Ketchup

   Meat Meat Meat

Bun Bun Bun Bun Bun

 

"Acrostic Poem"

swimming

By: Austin

 

Swim

Miles

Into

Large

Enemies

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (17)

Brady F said

at 12:09 pm on May 21, 2015

I like how a lot of yours are about hunting.

Mike B said

at 12:12 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your smile poem because its cool.

Joel G said

at 12:15 pm on May 21, 2015

I like how in your hamburger poem you describe how everything taste and if it is good or not.

Trey D said

at 12:16 pm on May 21, 2015

like your Burgers poem because it has a good ring to it.

Tristen M said

at 12:18 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your fish poem because you got 3 fish.

Payten L said

at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your first burger poem and that you explain what you like about each ingredient on the burger.

Emily J. said

at 12:20 pm on May 21, 2015

i like your poem swimming because its funny

Lilly M said

at 12:23 pm on May 21, 2015

i agree with emily it is funny!

ashia g said

at 12:23 pm on May 21, 2015

I like you burger one beacsue it is what you would probly put on a hamburger.

KarleeC said

at 12:25 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your lost baggage because it describes how people forget.

Sage M said

at 12:28 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your poem "Lost Baggage" because it's something a lot of people have to deal with.

Mia g said

at 12:31 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your first Burgers poem because it describes why you like them.

austin K said

at 12:33 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked the fishing one because fishing is really fun.

Dylan D said

at 12:38 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your poem about "Lost Baggage" because everyone forgets stuff.

Claire H said

at 9:39 am on May 22, 2015

I like "Swimming" the best because you came up with meaningful words to describe swimming.

Kenny G. said

at 10:40 am on May 22, 2015

I like your swimming, because you did a good job describing how you feel.

Leinissa T said

at 10:20 pm on May 22, 2015

I like your "Free verse"Hunting. Like when you use the action and using bang to pop.

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