The First Game. Rhyme scheme
It was the first game.
It wouldn’t be the same.
This was not basketball.
This was football.
There was that one second.
And I said “Guys chill for a second.”
We were now on the line.
I knew we would be fine.
We were off, I ran to the end of the field.
Then I yield.
Then the ball was near.
I was clear.
I caught it and I was near to the touchdown.
There was no more countdown.
I ran as fast as I can.
I was the front man.
I was in the zone.
The endzone.
Bad day Free verse
As I sit here in school.
It is so cruel.
I look out the window and think.
All the things I could do if I was a good kid in school.
I see all the kids run and play.
Good thing it a rainy day.
My Rude Teacher. Free verse
My teacher is so rude.
She is almost worst than the devil's food.
She tries to flunk me.
Like I’m a little punk.
But I’m not having it.
So I will stay legit.
She tests us over things we haven’t learned yet.
We all try not to get upset.
If she wasn’t so cruel.
I might like school.
My Dog Rhyme scheme
I have a dog.
Who act like a hog.
It likes spaghetti.
and chops it up with a machete.
His name is Fred.
I gave him a huge bed.
But he likes to nap.
Next to my baseball cap.
Kewl Acrostic Poem
Kewl
Eggcelent
Working
Loung
Brady Free verse
I DREAMED THAT BRADY RODE MY BUS.
THEN HE KICKED ME.
BUT REALLY BRADY RODE HIS BUS.
AND I BEAT HIM UP.
Punny Free verse
My puns are punny then yours
I’m not kitten around right meow.
I'm not yoking they can be cereal or eggcellent.
Hungry Free verse
Are you hungry
I can go to the fridge and get some turkey.
There's norway. It might be greeced up.
Mike Rhyme scheme
There's a kid named Mike
He has a nice bike
He sometimes gets in fights
Which makes alright.
So good night.
The boy Macoy Rhyme scheme
Theres a boy
Named Macoy
Everybody jumps for joy
Because he's from Illinois
He also annoy’s
Little kids so thats why we jump for joy
Comments (22)
Brennan I said
at 1:10 pm on May 20, 2015
I like the one about Kewl. It is your own special language that you use.
Brady F said
at 9:52 am on May 21, 2015
Good job Brady I like the puns there good.
Austin M. said
at 10:01 am on May 21, 2015
I like the football poem it really got me interested.
Emily J. said
at 10:03 am on May 21, 2015
I like the punny poem because it is really funny and you puns are good.
Tristen M said
at 10:04 am on May 21, 2015
I like the one about Kewl because it is about yor language that you made.
ashia g said
at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015
I like the rude teacher. You try not to get mad when they test you over stuff you don't know.
Payten L said
at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015
I really like your My Dog Rhyme Scheme poem. It's funny because of the good rhyme scheme words you have. Great job.
Mia g said
at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015
Great job! I like your style of rhyming and the words you pick.
Camille H said
at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015
I really really like "My Rude Teacher" it reminds me of a specific teacher. I like the way you wrote it out, but it's not free verse it's Rhyme Scheme. I really enjoyed it it made me laugh really hard in my head, good job.
Mike B said
at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015
I like your punny poem because its funny and rhymed.
Joel G said
at 10:06 am on May 21, 2015
I like how all of your poems rhyme and make sense when they rhyme.
Dylan D said
at 10:07 am on May 21, 2015
Nice Job! I like the Rhyme Scheme poems! Especially about the Dog!
Kenny G. said
at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015
I like your "Punny" poem because it seems like you use those ALL THE TIME!!! I'm glad you put them to a good use.
austin K said
at 10:11 am on May 21, 2015
I liked the football game one because we once had a game against Jesup and the reffs blew the whistle and we stopped but the otherr team kept going. They scored and that's how they beat us. I had the same thing happen but it was bad for our team.
Kendra T said
at 10:13 am on May 21, 2015
I like the style of your poems, and your choice of words and rhyming.
Lilly M said
at 10:15 am on May 21, 2015
I really liked the "hungry" one i loved the way you used countries to make a poem!!
Sage M said
at 10:21 am on May 21, 2015
Magnificent job! I liked your poem "Punny", and all the puns overflowing from it.
Trey D said
at 10:30 am on May 21, 2015
I like your first poem because of the style of it and the ryhmes.
KarleeC said
at 12:11 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your hungry poem because of the way you used countries.
Macoy b said
at 12:15 pm on May 21, 2015
I like the rude teacher poem it really explains
Claire H said
at 9:14 am on May 22, 2015
I really like your poem titled The First Game. It was really clever rhyme scheme that was very entertaining and well written.
Leinissa T said
at 9:41 pm on May 22, 2015
I like the the First Game poem, i like when you describe your action of what your doing.
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