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Concrete/Picture Poem
Wait Up!
Running down the sidewalk
Losing my Breathe
I’m trying to catch up with my friend
I think that’s her
She has her hair
and has her height
I sprint to her and tap on her shoulder
Oh I guess not
WAIT, I think I see her over there
“Hey! Wait Up!”
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Cinquain Poem
Perfect day
The Most Perfect Day Ever!!
Sun shining, birds chirping,
heat rising, wind blowing,
starts raining, then lighting,
Tree falling, dog whimpering
The Worst Day Ever!!!!!!!!
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Comments (15)
Pauline C said
at 8:45 am on May 21, 2015
I like your poem about school, the words flow very well
kevin b said
at 8:54 am on May 21, 2015
I liked the poem about the "bulls" because it gave you the imagination with what you say in the poem itself with all the great details like bulls can't flip geologists have tried.
Trenten M said
at 9:01 am on May 21, 2015
I like the ABC poem because it shows that you like coco
Emma P said
at 9:02 am on May 21, 2015
Your ABC poem was very good..
Natasha G. said
at 9:07 am on May 21, 2015
I like the ABC one because it went threw easily.
Mady T. said
at 9:17 am on May 21, 2015
I liked you ice cream poem, everyone like to eat ice in the summer. Your ice cream poem was honest-to-goodness true poem. Good job Brianne!
Megan K said
at 9:20 am on May 21, 2015
I liked the ice cream poem, because most everyone likes ice cream.
Joey S. said
at 9:27 am on May 21, 2015
I like the ABC because its funny and I like the Zebra joke at the end
Stryker L. said
at 9:30 am on May 21, 2015
I like the coco and honey one cause its kind of like a nursery ryhm
Tanner G said
at 9:33 am on May 21, 2015
I like the hey wait up because that happens to a lot of people everyday and I felt like I was there because it was so realistic.
Jocelyn K said
at 9:34 am on May 21, 2015
I enjoyed your ABC Dance poem because it tells you that you can dance just for fun.
Dylan B said
at 9:37 am on May 21, 2015
I like the Acrostic poem about ice cream because I love ice cream.
Levi L. said
at 9:39 am on May 21, 2015
I like your dream poem about Marilyn Monroe it was very interesting.
Tracy H said
at 8:33 am on May 22, 2015
I loved the coco and honey poem because you can tell what you like.
Leinissa T said
at 9:30 am on May 26, 2015
I like your Wait Up, I can totally see you doing that. Great Job
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