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BryanR

Page history last edited by Bryan R 8 years, 11 months ago

Football

The smell of the grass

The feel of the dew

The violent touch of another player

The rush of adrenaline in your veins

The thrill of the game

 

 

Comments (23)

Brennan I said

at 3:10 pm on May 20, 2015

I like the Football, I have had the same experiences.

Mike B said

at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015

Same here

Brady F said

at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015

Great poem Bryan.

Zander B said

at 12:56 pm on May 21, 2015

I had the same experiences, and the way I read the poem I got a certain calmness from it

Weller C said

at 12:58 pm on May 21, 2015

I guess I'd have to say the 1st one is my favorite? I like to way you reallt dug down deep into the sport and found the right words.

Hannah V said

at 1:04 pm on May 21, 2015

I like this poem because it's like your there, and it really explains it!

Miranda J said

at 1:06 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your poem! Good details!!

Taylor N said

at 1:07 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked the details that you used in your poem to make it feel like your that person.

Chloe Gr said

at 1:07 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your poem because it makes you feel like your playing football.

Rebecca F. said

at 1:11 pm on May 21, 2015

I like all of the details that you used to describe everything.

Ian M. said

at 1:13 pm on May 21, 2015

It was very descriptive and your wording was great. Nice Job!

Jade O said

at 1:17 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the details you had and how you describe the feelings.

Ezra S said

at 1:17 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your football poem because it makes me feel like I'm really there.

Kaylin K-T said

at 1:19 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your poem. I get a clear visual and I feel like I'm the person playing it.

Moises C. said

at 1:31 pm on May 21, 2015

The football one creates a good picture helps you imagine yourself in the game.

Chloe Ga said

at 1:31 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the details you put in your poem. good job

Gina G said

at 1:40 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the football poem because of how you said the rush of adrenaline in your veins. Good Job.

kevin b said

at 1:46 pm on May 21, 2015

same expirience

Dylan F said

at 2:59 pm on May 21, 2015

I like that feeling poem.

Brinna E. said

at 9:14 am on May 22, 2015

Good job on the football poem it really describes what's going on.

Julie M said

at 12:34 pm on May 22, 2015

I liked how you put a lot of meaning into it. Good job.

Morganne M said

at 12:48 pm on May 22, 2015

You did a good job with describing.

Cassi M said

at 2:24 pm on May 25, 2015

Your describing words that you chose where great.

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