1. in martial arts we learn kempo
and arnese the weapons really glow
sometimes in kempo we get to throw our foe
2. this poem is neither yours nor mine
just think of joy or pride
3. ps3’s
play games,
watch movies,
then sit back,
and drink smoothies
4. All
Boxes
Come with a
Destiny although
Everything
Fare isn’t
Going to
Happen, but
Isn’t life
Joining us together
Knowing we are weak but will climb
Life’s ladder
5.
Protective
Allways there
Read
Exusted
Never let go
Teaching
6. bun, bun bun, bun, bun,bun
pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle
cheese cheese cheese cheese cheese
hamburger hamburger hamburger hamburger
bun, bun bun bun, bun, bun
7.
Cool
Accelerate
Reverse
8. the birds aren't churping,
and the pigs aren't slurping
even in the morning its easy to find,
peace in this lonely country side.
9. crust, crust, crust, crust, crust, crust
crust, crust, crust, crust, crust, crust
cheese, cheese,cheese,pepperoni
pepperoni,cheese, cheese,pepperoni
cheese, cheese, cheese
cheese, cheese
cheese
Comments (19)
Austin M. said
at 10:09 am on May 21, 2015
I like the hamburger poem because it shows every part of a hamburger.
Payten L said
at 10:17 am on May 21, 2015
I think the 2nd poem is very interesting because of the way you say that it's not yours or mine. It's different in a good way.
austin K said
at 10:20 am on May 21, 2015
I like the hamburger one because it makes me want to have one.
Mia g said
at 10:21 am on May 21, 2015
I like your 2nd poem because you have to think about the first line.
ashia g said
at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015
I like the 2 one beacuse I read throught it 2 and it is kinda confusing, but good.
Kenny G. said
at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015
I like #5 because to me it is a good motivator.
Joel G said
at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015
I like how you described learning kempo.
Sage M said
at 10:28 am on May 21, 2015
I like poem number 4, and the comparison of life and years to a ladder. It was really nice.
Lilly M said
at 10:29 am on May 21, 2015
i like your second one cause of the rhyming and the way that its written
Mike B said
at 12:00 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your cheeseburger because it makes me hungry.
Emily J. said
at 12:02 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your Parents poem because its so true
Trey D said
at 12:07 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your hamburger poem because I like hamburgers.
Tristen M said
at 12:11 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your hamburger one because it looks like a hamburger and I like hamburgers.
Dylan D said
at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015
I like you hamburger one because it make me hungry!
KarleeC said
at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your PS3 poem because because it describes how relaxing it can be.
Brady F said
at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015
I like the Ps3 one because I can relate.
Claire H said
at 9:20 am on May 22, 2015
I like your martial arts poem best because I don't know much about it, but you wrote it well, so I feel like I learned something.
Kendra T said
at 10:13 am on May 22, 2015
I like the 8th poem because I can picture a nice morning in the country side.
Leinissa T said
at 9:50 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your 4th poem, I like when use the ladder to be life.
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