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DevinH

Page history last edited by devin h 8 years, 11 months ago

1. in martial arts we learn kempo

and arnese the weapons really glow

sometimes in kempo we get to throw our foe

 

2. this poem is neither yours nor mine

just think of joy or pride

 

3. ps3’s

play games,

watch movies,

then sit back,

and drink smoothies

 

4. All

Boxes

Come with a

Destiny although

Everything

Fare isn’t

Going to

Happen, but

Isn’t life

Joining us together

Knowing we are weak but will climb

Life’s ladder

 

5. 

Protective

Allways there

Read

Exusted

Never let go

Teaching

 

6.         bun, bun bun, bun, bun,bun

       pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle 

         cheese cheese cheese cheese cheese

hamburger hamburger  hamburger hamburger  

            bun, bun bun bun, bun, bun 

7.

Cool

Accelerate

Reverse

 

8. the birds aren't churping,

and the pigs aren't slurping

even in the morning its easy to find,

peace in this lonely country side.

 

9.           crust, crust, crust, crust, crust, crust 

               crust, crust, crust, crust, crust, crust

                   cheese, cheese,cheese,pepperoni

                    pepperoni,cheese, cheese,pepperoni

                        cheese, cheese, cheese

                                    cheese, cheese   

                                          cheese 

 

Comments (19)

Austin M. said

at 10:09 am on May 21, 2015

I like the hamburger poem because it shows every part of a hamburger.

Payten L said

at 10:17 am on May 21, 2015

I think the 2nd poem is very interesting because of the way you say that it's not yours or mine. It's different in a good way.

austin K said

at 10:20 am on May 21, 2015

I like the hamburger one because it makes me want to have one.

Mia g said

at 10:21 am on May 21, 2015

I like your 2nd poem because you have to think about the first line.

ashia g said

at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015

I like the 2 one beacuse I read throught it 2 and it is kinda confusing, but good.

Kenny G. said

at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015

I like #5 because to me it is a good motivator.

Joel G said

at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015

I like how you described learning kempo.

Sage M said

at 10:28 am on May 21, 2015

I like poem number 4, and the comparison of life and years to a ladder. It was really nice.

Lilly M said

at 10:29 am on May 21, 2015

i like your second one cause of the rhyming and the way that its written

Mike B said

at 12:00 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your cheeseburger because it makes me hungry.

Emily J. said

at 12:02 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your Parents poem because its so true

Trey D said

at 12:07 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your hamburger poem because I like hamburgers.

Tristen M said

at 12:11 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your hamburger one because it looks like a hamburger and I like hamburgers.

Dylan D said

at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015

I like you hamburger one because it make me hungry!

KarleeC said

at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your PS3 poem because because it describes how relaxing it can be.

Brady F said

at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the Ps3 one because I can relate.

Claire H said

at 9:20 am on May 22, 2015

I like your martial arts poem best because I don't know much about it, but you wrote it well, so I feel like I learned something.

Kendra T said

at 10:13 am on May 22, 2015

I like the 8th poem because I can picture a nice morning in the country side.

Leinissa T said

at 9:50 pm on May 22, 2015

I like your 4th poem, I like when use the ladder to be life.

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