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DylanB

Page history last edited by Mrs. K. 8 years, 11 months ago

My friend

 

Sitting there

in my truck

driving around

looking in town

can’t seem to

find anybody

I hit that dirt road

looking for a load

finding a friend

thats when

I finally found

you strolling

along making

me strong

thats when

I found

you.


Good

happy, smile

laughing, partying, smiling

strong, superior, feeling, stupendous

exploding, forgetting, regretting

angry, overruled

Bad


All

Turkeys

dance on

corn

taking

lead in

May


There are four very

important words in life:

believe, truth, courage,

and guts.

Without these good

helping words in your

life you have nothing.


Sometimes you got

to let go of the things

that are most important

in life. Not because you

have to. Because its

the right thing to do.


The moment when

you think the world

is against you and

you're ready to quit

is usually the moment

that wonderful

miracle happens.

 

Never give up


-Believe

It is not a weak kid word,

it is a word that describes

that a person has faith

in all that are true and has

enough to live for and doesn’t

depend on others to hold

them back with lies.


As the sun rises in the

fields. I see the glow

across the feathers

of the turkeys. In the

wonderful May.


The big turkey strutting

the gun pointing the way

dropping down finally.


There once was a kid hunting

He aimed at a turkey strutting

He shot at his big head

and he fed him lead

He was happy and he was smiling.

 

Comments (16)

Joey S. said

at 8:34 am on May 21, 2015

I really like your bright green poem because its so true.

Levi L. said

at 8:36 am on May 21, 2015

I like how in some of your poems that they were to incourage the reader.

Trenten M said

at 8:36 am on May 21, 2015

I like your first poem because you had good rhymes

BrianneR said

at 8:44 am on May 21, 2015

I like the one about the four important words because they are encouraging

EveHJ said

at 8:47 am on May 21, 2015

Your bright green poem is full of what the truth stands for, that's totally cool.

Pauline C said

at 8:47 am on May 21, 2015

I like your poem about turkeys, it is very funny

kevin b said

at 8:57 am on May 21, 2015

I liked how your poems gave me the great specifics on how you were looking for a friend and then you that friend.

Emma P said

at 9:00 am on May 21, 2015

Your last poem was very good. Intrested me.

Mady T. said

at 9:05 am on May 21, 2015

I really liked your bright green poem with the 4 most important words. I think that it's very true and realistic, it's also motivational to people who don't like to tell truth or do any of those words. Good job Dylan!

Megan K said

at 9:18 am on May 21, 2015

I liked the bright green poem, because it's true and you give reasoning behind them.

SierraF said

at 9:31 am on May 21, 2015

I like your poem about the person shooting the turkey, funny.

Stryker L. said

at 9:31 am on May 21, 2015

I like the poems about the turkey because Its about finely after waiting a while you got a turkey

Jocelyn K said

at 9:32 am on May 21, 2015

I enjoyed your believe poem because you said that it was not just a word for weak children.

Tanner G said

at 9:34 am on May 21, 2015

I like how you use important and encouraging words in your poems

Mike B said

at 12:16 pm on May 21, 2015

The poem about turkeys is true!

Dylan said

at 8:19 am on May 22, 2015

Your poems use inspiring sentences

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