My friend
Sitting there
in my truck
driving around
looking in town
can’t seem to
find anybody
I hit that dirt road
looking for a load
finding a friend
thats when
I finally found
you strolling
along making
me strong
thats when
I found
you.
Good
happy, smile
laughing, partying, smiling
strong, superior, feeling, stupendous
exploding, forgetting, regretting
angry, overruled
Bad
All
Turkeys
dance on
corn
taking
lead in
May
There are four very
important words in life:
believe, truth, courage,
and guts.
Without these good
helping words in your
life you have nothing.
Sometimes you got
to let go of the things
that are most important
in life. Not because you
have to. Because its
the right thing to do.
The moment when
you think the world
is against you and
you're ready to quit
is usually the moment
that wonderful
miracle happens.
Never give up
-Believe
It is not a weak kid word,
it is a word that describes
that a person has faith
in all that are true and has
enough to live for and doesn’t
depend on others to hold
them back with lies.
As the sun rises in the
fields. I see the glow
across the feathers
of the turkeys. In the
wonderful May.
The big turkey strutting
the gun pointing the way
dropping down finally.
There once was a kid hunting
He aimed at a turkey strutting
He shot at his big head
and he fed him lead
He was happy and he was smiling.
Comments (16)
Joey S. said
at 8:34 am on May 21, 2015
I really like your bright green poem because its so true.
Levi L. said
at 8:36 am on May 21, 2015
I like how in some of your poems that they were to incourage the reader.
Trenten M said
at 8:36 am on May 21, 2015
I like your first poem because you had good rhymes
BrianneR said
at 8:44 am on May 21, 2015
I like the one about the four important words because they are encouraging
EveHJ said
at 8:47 am on May 21, 2015
Your bright green poem is full of what the truth stands for, that's totally cool.
Pauline C said
at 8:47 am on May 21, 2015
I like your poem about turkeys, it is very funny
kevin b said
at 8:57 am on May 21, 2015
I liked how your poems gave me the great specifics on how you were looking for a friend and then you that friend.
Emma P said
at 9:00 am on May 21, 2015
Your last poem was very good. Intrested me.
Mady T. said
at 9:05 am on May 21, 2015
I really liked your bright green poem with the 4 most important words. I think that it's very true and realistic, it's also motivational to people who don't like to tell truth or do any of those words. Good job Dylan!
Megan K said
at 9:18 am on May 21, 2015
I liked the bright green poem, because it's true and you give reasoning behind them.
SierraF said
at 9:31 am on May 21, 2015
I like your poem about the person shooting the turkey, funny.
Stryker L. said
at 9:31 am on May 21, 2015
I like the poems about the turkey because Its about finely after waiting a while you got a turkey
Jocelyn K said
at 9:32 am on May 21, 2015
I enjoyed your believe poem because you said that it was not just a word for weak children.
Tanner G said
at 9:34 am on May 21, 2015
I like how you use important and encouraging words in your poems
Mike B said
at 12:16 pm on May 21, 2015
The poem about turkeys is true!
Dylan said
at 8:19 am on May 22, 2015
Your poems use inspiring sentences
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