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Sonnet-Basketball
Sweat dripping from my face
going at my fastest pace,
get to a complete stop
put up a shot,
the ball sailed through the air
came down like a prayer,
hit the rim didn’t I know where to go
my heart sank to my toe,
went all the way around
I was ready for the rebound,
the ball went right through
everyone was excited I was too,
as the buzzer rang
the ball made a bang.
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Acrostic Poem-Sports
Soccer
Ping pong
Off road racing
Rugby
Track
Softball
Acrostic poem-Dylan
Driving
Your
Lamborghini
And
Nissan
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Cinquain-Cheetahs
Cheetahs
speed,sneaky,
Hunting,camouflage, stalk
world fastest, best animal
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Concrete picture poem-Tree
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Memory Moment- The dream
I was sprinting as fast as I could,
but the beast was right behind.
I was hoping this was all a dream,
but i’m not sure if it is or not.
The beast is getting closer,
I tripped it is the end of me it raised a
sword right as it was about to hit me
I heard a loud ringing noise it scared the
monster and I ran again and the ringing
went on again and I woke up and it was
my alarm clock it was all a dream.
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Abc poem-Animals
Armadillo
Barn owl
Cheetah
Deer
Emu
Frigate eagle
Galapagos penguin
Hare
Impala
Jaguar
King cobra
Lizard
Mockingbird
Narwhals
Ostrich
Pelicans
Queen bee
Robin
Snake
Tiger
Umbrellabird
Vultures
Whales
X-ray tetra
Yak
Zebra
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Alliteration poem-Snakes
Slimy snakes slither slowly slipping through the sunny swamp.
Slithering hissing shedding scaring some scurrying squirrels.
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Limerick-Ow
An ostrich pecked me in the head,
And he also pecked Fred.
So I had to get a shot
and it hurt a lot.
Then I went to bed.
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Haiku-Birds
Birds chirping in trees.
Birds flailing in summer days.
Birds singing way loud.
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Comments (22)
Brennan I said
at 3:25 pm on May 20, 2015
I like both of the sport poems. Good job
Moises C. said
at 1:00 pm on May 21, 2015
The Dream one has more of a vivid picture and more like suspense. Seeing the monster chase you then to wake up and find out it was all just all a dream, pretty scary.
Ezra S said
at 1:05 pm on May 21, 2015
I beast poem because I can easily relate to many of those type of dreams.
Gina G said
at 1:08 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your basketball one because it rhymed and because that always happens in a basketball game.
Sam W said
at 1:09 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your cheetah poem because cheetahs are awesome
Chloe Ga said
at 1:09 pm on May 21, 2015
Good job on your sports poems
Weller C said
at 1:18 pm on May 21, 2015
Your tree is very beautiful Brennan, good work!
Weller C said
at 1:19 pm on May 21, 2015
Sorry I meant to say Dylan...
Hannah V said
at 1:25 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your Cheetahs Poem because it's true, and gives a visual picture.
Zander B said
at 1:34 pm on May 21, 2015
I like the Cheetah poem, great word choice, and the concrete Tree was neat as well. Goood Job!
Taylor N said
at 1:38 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked your poem about basketball because I enjoy playing basketball.
Seth M said
at 1:41 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your ABC poem because it takes a lot of work to find animals with all the letters in the alphabet.
Chloe Gr said
at 1:47 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your tree poem and the idea of it. It looks really cool.
Kaylin K-T said
at 1:49 pm on May 21, 2015
I like "Cheetahs", because I get a clear visual of a cheetah chasing its prey.
Rebecca F. said
at 1:53 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your Tree because it is really cool.
Miranda J said
at 1:54 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your dream poem. I can get a good image from this.
Ian M. said
at 2:24 pm on May 21, 2015
Nice poems i liked the one about birds the best.
Brinna E. said
at 8:58 am on May 22, 2015
Nice job on your poem about basketball I liked how it showed how the last minutes were like.
Julie M said
at 12:54 pm on May 22, 2015
I liked your poem about basketball because it made me feel like I was there.
Morganne M said
at 1:12 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your memory moment, because it was just a dream.
Jade O said
at 1:15 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your ostrich poem because I like Ostriches and it was funny.
Cassi M said
at 1:28 pm on May 25, 2015
Dylan, I enjoyed your basketball poem because it reminds me of this past season.
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