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The fight began, Mordecai and Jordan stepped closer and closer there knuckles pounded for good luck and he noticed he had a bloody hand. Jordan made the first punch surprising Mordecai. So he swept his foot and dodged it with a crunch. Jordan suddenly slammed his fore leg onto Mordecai's scalp... 1
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Everywhere I go my family tells me what to do, well there is everything to know then my sister go to talk to her crew.
There is not enough room for you!
But I want some pizza too!
Then go help yourself!
You know what I’ll just read a book from my shelf!
And here!, it’s bag of prunes!
HEY! EVE! do you want to draw?
No.
Why not?
I live in the Thug life now..
(Crack!!!!) OWW! you stepped on my toe….
Its okay bro…
Thats it Im coming back with a claw!
PIKACHU! I CHOOSE YOU!
You’re my strongest Pokemon
now lets capture that Mewtwo!
I have a paw and I eat food that is raw..And im also very tall Little kids think I am care bear but i am actually a polar bear.
In order to think I need peace in order to have peace than I the key.
mlg pro I am white as snow only one thing remains that ugly plateau.
Comments (16)
EveHJ said
at 8:35 am on May 21, 2015
All of your poems are very inspiring and hilarious, I like how you said I live the thug life now, Awesomeness plus you're an awesome poet so that's extra awesome.
Trenten M said
at 8:48 am on May 21, 2015
I think the pokemon poem is cool because no one has done one of pokemon yet
Natasha G. said
at 8:52 am on May 21, 2015
They are funny because you made me feel like I was there.
Megan K said
at 8:54 am on May 21, 2015
I think that they are unique, because they make you feel like you are there.
BrianneR said
at 8:58 am on May 21, 2015
Those were really funny and looks like you put a lot of work into them.
Pauline C said
at 9:06 am on May 21, 2015
All of your poems are very cool and different, I like how you incorporated different things into your poems
Joey S. said
at 9:10 am on May 21, 2015
I really like your Pokemon because you used two of my favorite Pokemon.
Jocelyn K said
at 9:11 am on May 21, 2015
I like how you put that the little kids thought of you as a care bear when you were actually a polar bear
Levi L. said
at 9:22 am on May 21, 2015
I liked you Pokemon because you used Pikachu.
SierraF said
at 9:37 am on May 21, 2015
Very funny and original poems!
Lexi R said
at 9:39 am on May 21, 2015
I like you first poem because it is very unique!
Tanner G said
at 9:46 am on May 21, 2015
I think that you have a very unique way of writing poems
Stryker L. said
at 9:46 am on May 21, 2015
I like the one with Jordan because you feel like your there
Tracy H said
at 8:57 am on May 22, 2015
I like all of them because it has humor and no dark stuff.
Moises C. said
at 9:25 am on May 22, 2015
I like how their all crazy and funny it really makes you think especially the first one which is pretty much continued helps people want to know what happens then.
Dylan B said
at 9:28 am on May 22, 2015
I like the first poem its cool
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