FOOTBALL
30 second breaks,
the crowd watches,
the kickoff of the game,
smashing helmets,
the crack pound of the pads hitting,
black and blue bruises,
calling plays,
kicking field goals,c
halftime time for little break and make new plays,
3rd quarter fired up to play again,
touchdowns made,
time to play,
green grass turns to mud,
the friday night lights,
the rain feels like sweat,
grass in your helmet,
mud on your jersey and pads,
touchdowns and field goals,
looking at your opponent's face,
black liner by your eyes,
sweat rolling down your face,
the center hikes the ball,
the qb runs the ball,
gets tackled,
4th down,
time to punt the ball,
you punt the ball 30 yards,
your opponents runs the ball,
he gets tackled,
and you win.
My House
My house is boring in the morning it starts to be stormy
and at night it's bright why don’t i use a flashlight
In the morning i'm snoring at night i'm in fright at noon i'm starting to take a snooze
Morning
I wake up in the morning,
i can here my brother snoring,
when he wakes up in the morning he thinks it's boring
then he gets all stormy
School
the clock goes tick tick the chair scrub against the ground the kids talking
not listening mad teacher yelling at us badly.
Sunny bunny
It's sunny i like to eat honey,
with a bunny that likes to eat honey
and i like bunny because they
like honey
Mike and Brady
Brady is nice
and he like mike
that has a cool bike
And he gets into big fights
that i don’t like
In a Boot
In a boot you sit all day all night
its terrible and can’t play sports
because it feels like a torch on a little porch
Brady
There once was a boy named Brady
who is kind of crazy and isn’t very
lazy he likes to eat cheese curds with his
little bird
Mike likes the mile
In the morning Mike doesn’t like to run the mile
Mike like the mile because it's a long run.
Mike like the style in the mile
My Sister
My sister has a big blister
and she my big sister she short and can’t make a fort,
can’t sort and can play sports .
Comments (23)
Brennan I said
at 1:01 pm on May 20, 2015
I like the one about you in a boot, because it is not fun and you can't do athletics and you are awesome at athletics
Natasha G. said
at 9:11 am on May 21, 2015
I like you rsunny bunny story.
BrianneR said
at 9:24 am on May 21, 2015
I like the sunny bunny poem because it's funny.
Trey D said
at 9:55 am on May 21, 2015
I can understand the boot poem because I had to wear a boot for 6 months!! I like the style you wrote it in tho. Good Job!
Tristen M said
at 9:56 am on May 21, 2015
I like the Morning one because it rhymes and it sounds cool
Emily J. said
at 9:58 am on May 21, 2015
I like the poem FOOTBALL because it talks about all the adrenaline you have for the gam and all the effort you put into the sport.
Austin M. said
at 9:59 am on May 21, 2015
I like the use of rhyming words in almost everyone of your poems
Camille H said
at 10:01 am on May 21, 2015
I like the Brady one because of the cheese curds part that was HILARIOUS! But you do have spelling errors in Sunny Bunny you have to capitalize the I. Other than that great job on your poems.
Payten L said
at 10:01 am on May 21, 2015
I really like your Sunny Bunny poem because of how you make the lines rhyme with sunny and bunny. It seems as if it is almost a tongue twister.
Mia g said
at 10:02 am on May 21, 2015
I like your sunny bunny poem it is very funny.
Joel G said
at 10:02 am on May 21, 2015
I like the poem about football because of the style of it. It makes you want to read more. Good job
ashia g said
at 10:03 am on May 21, 2015
I like the one about the boot because it tells what you think it feels like when you have to were it.
Brady F said
at 10:04 am on May 21, 2015
I like the sunny bunny poem because its funny and rhymes a lot.
Mike B said
at 10:04 am on May 21, 2015
I like your poem about mike and the mile because I hate running in the morning. Great job!
Kenny G. said
at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015
I like your "My House" poem because I relate to it.
austin K said
at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015
I like the boot one because being out of a sport that means so much to you really kills a man's heart.
Kendra T said
at 10:07 am on May 21, 2015
I like the Football poem it gives good description, It makes the reader want to read more. Nice job
Lilly M said
at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015
i like you sunny bunny story cause it has good rhyming and cause every one like bunnies
Sage M said
at 10:17 am on May 21, 2015
Terrific job! I like the "FOOTBALL" poem, and how it follows the events of a football game.
KarleeC said
at 12:02 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your FOOTBALL poem because of how you explained everything that happens during a game.
Dylan D said
at 12:14 pm on May 21, 2015
I really like your one about Mike and Brady!! Its so true!
Claire H said
at 9:12 am on May 22, 2015
I liked you poem titled My House. You gave an intertwining description about it that made me laugh.
Leinissa T said
at 9:35 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your Football poem, I like when describe action and it show how you like football.
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