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Free Verse 

The Swim Meet

  By: Sam

Hearing the event getting called,

100 yard freestyle,

looking at my arm

the black sharpie with the event on it

going to report putting on the swimcap

stepping up to the block

putting on my goggles

seeing the starter

listening to the words

“swimmers step up”

“take your mark”

hearing the whistle

diving into the water hearing a splash

25 yards doing a flip turn

50 yards another flip turn75 yards

hearing people yelling and cheering

then touching the wall

finished

 

Masterpiece

By: Sam 

When she looked out

she was beginning to shout

for what she saw she began to draw

and that is where she got her

masterpiece

 

Memory

By: Sam

I remember when

I went to my first

Hawkeye game

 

 

ABC 

Bears

By: Sam

All

Bears

Can’t

Dance

Except

Fake ones

 

Acrostic 

Enjoy

By: Sam

Everyone

Needs

Joy

Once

Yet

 

 

Rhyme 

In A Hurry

By: Sam

In a hurry no time to spare

must go hurry and brush my hair

better go brush my teeth

before my mother can even speak

for if we’re late

she will not wait

no time to spare

so bye there

 

Dog

By: Sam

She went to pet the dog

but turns out it was a hog

so she kept feeling sad

and then left feeling bad



Poe

By: Sam

Poe likes jam

all over his ham

then he eats

with his feet

 

 

 

Limerick 

By: Sam

Safe and Sound

She went to bed all safe and sound

till she heard someone pound

she got up still in fright

in the middle of the night

but then she saw her brothers hound

 

Wingspark 


My Dream

By: Sam

I dreamed

that Bethany Doolittle

came to my house

with a basketball

wanting to scrimmage

 

 

 

 

Comments (22)

Brennan I said

at 3:11 pm on May 20, 2015

I like the memory about going to a hawks game. Go Hawkeyes!!!

Emma P said

at 9:24 am on May 21, 2015

I lime your last one it was very simple, and easy.

Zander B said

at 12:57 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked the Memory Poem becuase I remember my first Hawkeye game! Great Job!

Weller C said

at 12:59 pm on May 21, 2015

Poe is my personal favorite, it really takes a real smart person to eat with their feet! xD

Hannah V said

at 1:06 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your, "My Dream" Poem because that is a good dream to have, and I can picture that!

Chloe Gr said

at 1:08 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your ABC poem about bears because it's really funny.

Taylor N said

at 1:09 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked your poem "Poe" because it's very interesting, yet amusing.

Miranda J said

at 1:10 pm on May 21, 2015

I really like your 'In a hurry" poem. It describes perfectly what is happening when you are in a hurry.

Rebecca F. said

at 1:14 pm on May 21, 2015

I really like your poem about being in a hurry in the morning.. sounds exactly what I have to do every morning.

Ian M. said

at 1:15 pm on May 21, 2015

I thought the one "Poe" was very...eccentric. Good Job!

Ezra S said

at 1:18 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the rhyme scheme in your dog poem.

Kaylin K-T said

at 1:22 pm on May 21, 2015

I like "Swim Meet," because I can relate to doing a 100 yard freestyle event.

Moises C. said

at 1:39 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the masterpiece because people do draw something accidentally and it turns out great.

Chloe Ga said

at 1:43 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your memory poem. Its very simple but cool. good job

Jade O said

at 1:46 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the dream one because it was funny.

Gina G said

at 1:55 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your dog one because it is funny and because it happened to me once. Good Job.

kevin b said

at 1:55 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the "poe" poem because it's very funny

Dylan F said

at 3:05 pm on May 21, 2015

The bear poem was funny.

Brinna E. said

at 9:20 am on May 22, 2015

I liked your dream because that is what you would dream about.

Julie M said

at 12:35 pm on May 22, 2015

I liked your safe and sound poem because it really describes how most mornings go.

Morganne M said

at 12:49 pm on May 22, 2015

I like your Poe poem because it's funny to read.

Cassi M said

at 2:30 pm on May 25, 2015

Sam, I enjoyed reading swim meet because it reminds me of the past and what is to come.

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