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TristenM

Page history last edited by Tristen M 8 years, 10 months ago

 

The mat free verse 

there I was on the mat with my opponent,

I saw the opportunity right away,

I shot my double hit is just right both down on the mat,

I decide to do more damage,

I put him in a firmans and slam him down,

he gets back up shoots misses,

I get him in a headlock hold i'm there for a couple of seconds,

halftime the ref flips the coin,

Green,

thats me,

I look in the crowd for my dad to see what I should call,

I choose freestyle,

the ref says go,

I strike straight for the single leg pick it up until he falls,

all I hear is,

1,

2,

3,

We get up,

my hand gets raised.By: Tristen

cinquain 

Made

Of

Money

by:Tristen M

 

Wings park  

I dreamt

Joel

Went to state wrestling

Wanting to to win

With his muscles

by:Tristen M

Wings park 

 

 

 

picture poem Pickle

pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle                                                               pickle pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle                                          pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle pickle  pickle

By:TristenM

April Cinquain

april showers may be bring us showers

it also takes up so many hours

of time to go for a run.By:Tristen M

Teacher Found Poem

I cant wait to get out of this chair

the teacher keeps talking about her life

like we really care

ring ring I'm out of here By:Tristen M

 

nap time Found Poem

I'm not even tired why is she making me lay i won't go to sleep my head has to many figures dancing in my  head

i"m not tired leave me alone

i'm asleep they think

hehehe it's time to eat

By:Tristen M



I had a dream wing spark 

that I was falling

wanting it not to happen

then I woke up

By:Tristen M

When I walked out there

all I could see

was my family staring at me

I felt my gut ripping

But I went out there

and did my best

 

Track free verse

I get my block after checking in

I wait for my heat and then I go out and set up my block

I get ready and the person I have holding my block gives me advice

I take their advice and then I get set

BANG!

I start running as hard as I can but then Ii remember the advice i slow down and pace myself

I win

 

 

Comments (22)

Brennan I said

at 1:12 pm on May 20, 2015

I like the one about Joel because it will happen in high school and we will all think back to this.

Austin M. said

at 10:06 am on May 21, 2015

I like the wrestling poem because i can relate to that.

Emily J. said

at 10:08 am on May 21, 2015

I like your pickle peom because it dose not look like a pickle

Mike B said

at 10:09 am on May 21, 2015

I like the one about track because I like running but I don't like running a lot.

Emily J. said

at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015

I like your pickle poem because you can see how it resembles a pickle

Joel G said

at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015

I like your poem about napping. Your rhyming makes it funny.

Brady F said

at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015

I like the nap time poem because just about everyone has been there.

Payten L said

at 10:12 am on May 21, 2015

I like your Track free verse because you use the sound devices and it makes it seem more realistic.

Mia g said

at 10:13 am on May 21, 2015

I like your teachers poem because the bell rings and we are all out of here.

Sage M said

at 10:14 am on May 21, 2015

I like your poem "Nap Time"! I like how close it is to a kid's scattered thoughts.

ashia g said

at 10:20 am on May 21, 2015

I like the poem about mom beacuse you think that she is full of money wich is what I think to sometimes.

Kenny G. said

at 10:20 am on May 21, 2015

I like your pickle poem because I like pickles.

Lilly M said

at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015

i liked the made of money one cause it speaks the truth

austin K said

at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015

I liked the one about Joel because it will happen it is so true.

Camille H said

at 10:29 am on May 21, 2015

I liked "nap time" because it reminds me of how when kids are little and never wanted to take naps and now that kids are now in middle school all they want to do it sleep.

Dylan D said

at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked "nap time" because it reminds me of when I don't wanna go to bed.

Trey D said

at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your pickle poem because I like pickles.

KarleeC said

at 12:28 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your track poem because of how you put it together.

Macoy b said

at 12:29 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the matt poem and the joel poem

Kendra T said

at 12:30 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked "Nap Time" because I remember when I never wanted to sleep.

Claire H said

at 9:17 am on May 22, 2015

I like "Track" best because I can relate to it. It was well written and grabbed my attention.

Leinissa T said

at 9:45 pm on May 22, 2015

I like your Track poem, it really show the action and how you use the word BANG! to pop it.

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