The mat free verse
there I was on the mat with my opponent,
I saw the opportunity right away,
I shot my double hit is just right both down on the mat,
I decide to do more damage,
I put him in a firmans and slam him down,
he gets back up shoots misses,
I get him in a headlock hold i'm there for a couple of seconds,
halftime the ref flips the coin,
Green,
thats me,
I look in the crowd for my dad to see what I should call,
I choose freestyle,
the ref says go,
I strike straight for the single leg pick it up until he falls,
all I hear is,
1,
2,
3,
We get up,
my hand gets raised.By: Tristen
cinquain
Made
Of
Money
by:Tristen M
Wings park
I dreamt
Joel
Went to state wrestling
Wanting to to win
With his muscles
by:Tristen M
Wings park
picture poem Pickle
pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle pickle
By:TristenM
April Cinquain
april showers may be bring us showers
it also takes up so many hours
of time to go for a run.By:Tristen M
Teacher Found Poem
I cant wait to get out of this chair
the teacher keeps talking about her life
like we really care
ring ring I'm out of here By:Tristen M
nap time Found Poem
I'm not even tired why is she making me lay i won't go to sleep my head has to many figures dancing in my head
i"m not tired leave me alone
i'm asleep they think
hehehe it's time to eat
By:Tristen M
I had a dream wing spark
that I was falling
wanting it not to happen
then I woke up
By:Tristen M
When I walked out there
all I could see
was my family staring at me
I felt my gut ripping
But I went out there
and did my best
Track free verse
I get my block after checking in
I wait for my heat and then I go out and set up my block
I get ready and the person I have holding my block gives me advice
I take their advice and then I get set
BANG!
I start running as hard as I can but then Ii remember the advice i slow down and pace myself
I win
Comments (22)
Brennan I said
at 1:12 pm on May 20, 2015
I like the one about Joel because it will happen in high school and we will all think back to this.
Austin M. said
at 10:06 am on May 21, 2015
I like the wrestling poem because i can relate to that.
Emily J. said
at 10:08 am on May 21, 2015
I like your pickle peom because it dose not look like a pickle
Mike B said
at 10:09 am on May 21, 2015
I like the one about track because I like running but I don't like running a lot.
Emily J. said
at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015
I like your pickle poem because you can see how it resembles a pickle
Joel G said
at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015
I like your poem about napping. Your rhyming makes it funny.
Brady F said
at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015
I like the nap time poem because just about everyone has been there.
Payten L said
at 10:12 am on May 21, 2015
I like your Track free verse because you use the sound devices and it makes it seem more realistic.
Mia g said
at 10:13 am on May 21, 2015
I like your teachers poem because the bell rings and we are all out of here.
Sage M said
at 10:14 am on May 21, 2015
I like your poem "Nap Time"! I like how close it is to a kid's scattered thoughts.
ashia g said
at 10:20 am on May 21, 2015
I like the poem about mom beacuse you think that she is full of money wich is what I think to sometimes.
Kenny G. said
at 10:20 am on May 21, 2015
I like your pickle poem because I like pickles.
Lilly M said
at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015
i liked the made of money one cause it speaks the truth
austin K said
at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015
I liked the one about Joel because it will happen it is so true.
Camille H said
at 10:29 am on May 21, 2015
I liked "nap time" because it reminds me of how when kids are little and never wanted to take naps and now that kids are now in middle school all they want to do it sleep.
Dylan D said
at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked "nap time" because it reminds me of when I don't wanna go to bed.
Trey D said
at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your pickle poem because I like pickles.
KarleeC said
at 12:28 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your track poem because of how you put it together.
Macoy b said
at 12:29 pm on May 21, 2015
I like the matt poem and the joel poem
Kendra T said
at 12:30 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked "Nap Time" because I remember when I never wanted to sleep.
Claire H said
at 9:17 am on May 22, 2015
I like "Track" best because I can relate to it. It was well written and grabbed my attention.
Leinissa T said
at 9:45 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your Track poem, it really show the action and how you use the word BANG! to pop it.
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