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The Gabunga
As you walk through the woods
You must be sly
For what hides inside
Can never die
He lurks in the shadows,
He never comes out
And he grabs so quick,
You don't have time to shout
He'll take you to his lair,
And he'll give you a scare
But all he wants to do is
DANCE!!!!
He'll boogie and shake,
He'll make the earth quake
He'll do the Spooker and the Shiver
His moves will make you quiver
He will dance with the goblins
And move with the mummies
But he will put them to shame
They'll think their moves are lame
When compared to the Gabunga's beat
They've just got 2 left feet
When they've danced the night away
He'll then cry "i wish you could stay!"
Then you wish him farewell,
You think "that went pretty well"
And he EATS YOU!!!!
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Comments (19)
Colby said
at 3:15 pm on May 22, 2009
took me a little bit but i figured it out................... it has a creative twist
Mitchell said
at 11:42 pm on May 22, 2009
that was very original and made me think about how that would work
Belle said
at 3:38 pm on May 25, 2009
i really like it this way but im not gonna lie i liked the original better
Belle said
at 3:38 pm on May 25, 2009
you should put the other one on too! srry i thought of that after i posted the other comment.
Kathleen said
at 10:36 am on May 26, 2009
I love the liar poem Great Job!
Angela said
at 10:56 am on May 26, 2009
i love your poems Dakota!
keep up the good work!
Kennedy said
at 10:56 am on May 26, 2009
I love the one about you, I believe it is titled LIAR!! Lol and it IS opposite from you! :D!
Trevor said
at 12:07 pm on May 26, 2009
I love the liar poem
Leah said
at 12:08 pm on May 26, 2009
I like the one about the barbershop and how it is colored!!
Kjerstin said
at 3:04 pm on May 26, 2009
A lot of people love the liar poem, but honestly, I'm not so sure about that.
Oh well. I'll be shocked if you don't get an A+ in English for this.
Great job!
Kjerstin said
at 3:05 pm on May 26, 2009
P.S.
You've got talent!
Belle said
at 4:50 pm on May 26, 2009
I love "what a jerk" i seriously started laughing
Dylan said
at 10:30 am on May 27, 2009
very nice poems
Kennedy said
at 10:33 am on May 27, 2009
Love the poems! You are so creative in them!!
KatlynG said
at 11:45 am on May 28, 2009
very nice poems dakota i like all of them
Trevor said
at 12:00 pm on May 28, 2009
i love the Gubunga poem.
Zach said
at 12:03 pm on May 28, 2009
I like your poems they ROCK LIKE CHARLIE BROWN. GOOD JOB!
Kalleigh said
at 12:10 pm on May 28, 2009
i like all of your poems
!!!
Mrs. K. said
at 10:09 am on Jun 2, 2009
Good variety and very clever. I like the liar poem the best, I think. I also like the Gabunga poem--it makes me think of the Jabberwock!
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