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                                                                    Rhyme

 

I spend time thinking of a rhyme with my mind

 

so why can't I think of a rhyme at this time

 

I need to make at least one  line

 

of a rhyme - great rhyme

 

will It ever be

 

fine.

 

 

Limeric

 

 

the babbling of the fountain

makes me want to go to the mountain

and catch me some fish

to make a great dish

to eat at the foot of the mountain.

 

 

Xiyo Xiyo were have you been

i hope your not off writting poems again

your not in the freezer your not in the fridge

so I guess your off writting poems again.

 

 

Free verse

 

I had a little snowman it was so bright it shinned 

then when i brought him in the house one night

and when daylight came to me

I knew he wet the bed and left

 

 

D  destructive 

Y  young

L  lounging

A  amazing

N  noble

 

 

 

pets are loyal, useful

a good friend deturmined

almost always tame

sometimes pets are friends

some pets are enemies

but most of the time pets are wild!

 

oh Daric the barbaric

a ferit went by old Garet

the faret looked

the faret shook

and old Garet became barbaric

 

 

if i were a bird

i would be able to fly

i would like that life

 

Terible

Horrifiing

Unusual

Noise

Deafening

Electricity

Roaring

 

me and the forest

oh the colors are better

they are colorful

 

 

durable

endureable

standable

kills trees

 

 

i love cats

and i love bats

i love frogs

and i love hogs

 

 

i do not know what i don't see but i might see a tree

way way far away from me i follow the way

the great way to the tree the way to it is great

way far away the trees stare at me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

i went to the caves one day

i went to save all of my say

about the way it lays

in here so i will not stay

 

algebra

biography

cargenine

domestical study

earth science

forestry

geograpphy

history

industrial

jungleism

kenizialigy

luxetaition

mamalligy

nationalism

optimaligy

physialigy

quaceism

remedology

studies

technology

utarity

volcanoligist

waitranism

xerogrophy

yoseation

zooaligy

 

 

antilope

bat

cat

doe

faret

goose

horse

igwana

j

kangeroo

lion

mouse

noie

owl

paurpel

quiss

rabit

snake

tiger

uranium

visual

water bufalo

xie

yosony lizzard

zebra

 

 

 

 

 

 

FIRE 

fire

 

light

 

fire

 

sight

 

fire

 

free

 

fire

 

resorseful

 

fire

 

fine

 

fire

 

fantastic

 

fire

 

burn

 

fire

 

hurt

 

fire

 

spark

 

fire

 

smoke

 

fire

 

glare

 

fire

 

big

 

fire

 

long

 

fire

 

great

 

fire

 

hot

 

fire

 

great

 

fire

 

usefull

 

fire

 

known

 

fire

 

colorful

 

fire

 

grand

 

fire

 

beutiful

 

fire

 

magnifacint

 

fire

 

so fine

 

fire

 

the best

 

fire

 

fire

 

 

bliber blader

on the paper

as i write and

write this poem

more and more

 

 

 

 

 

the boy fell into a huge well

the boy fell into a huge wel

the boy fell into a huge we

the boy fell into a huge w

the boy fell into a huge

the boy fell into a hug

the boy fell into a hu

the boy fell into a h

the boy fell into a

the boy fell into

the boy fell int

the boy fell in

the boy fell i

the boy fell

the boy fel

the boy fe

the boy f

the boy

the bo

the b

the

th

t

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (8)

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Dylan said

at 10:57 am on May 22, 2009

nice

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Belle said

at 3:30 pm on May 25, 2009

I really like your poem. That's what most people are thinking when they're working on a poem.

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Kennedy said

at 10:48 am on May 26, 2009

I like your rhyme one. It is so very true!

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Leah said

at 3:00 pm on May 26, 2009

Your rhyme poem is SO true!

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Kathleen said

at 10:43 am on May 27, 2009

I love the Rhyme poem..I agree it is sooo true!

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Doug said

at 10:46 am on May 27, 2009

Dylan they are very very very good

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Corby said

at 11:00 am on May 27, 2009

You use great rhyme themes good job.

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Mrs. K. said

at 3:11 pm on Jun 1, 2009

You have a good variety of poems and were very creative.

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