vippoets

 

josephk

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Summer

A awsome

B baseball

C claims to be HOT!!

D down in the woods

E eating good food

F fun

G games with friends

H humid

I  ice cream

junk food

K kite flying

L like to play backyard football

M more fun

N napping in the evening

O off on your own

P popsicle sticks

Q quilting free time in the summer

R running all over the place

S swimming

T taking trips to amusement parks

U untold time you have to be in bed

V value of gas so high

W water is so fun at water parks

X x-treme fun

Y you now that you think summer is fun

Z zips right past now it is time to go back to school

 

 

   Haiku poem

 

tigers are so fearsome

they have sharp teeth and sharp claws

tigers are so scary

 

dogs are so cute

patting wagging dogs

dogs are the best ever

 

trampoling are cool

you can get high and do tricks

I like them a lot

 

 

Concrete Poem

 

sign

  sign sign sign

sign sign sign sign

sign sign sign

sign

pole

pole

pole

pole

pole

pole

 

 

Alliiteration poem

 

Paul played in the

playdough patting it

tearing pieces off

Paul had fun

 

 

Hanna hit so many

hats on the hill her hillbilly

of a brother laughed

on the hill

 

 

Simile poem

 

The dog bounced like a bouncy ball has he went into the cold basement it was so

cold it was like the ice age

so then he went to sleep

like a baby and was comfortable

 

found poem

 

tractor

farmers

planting crops

slow

tractor

 

plowing

planting

driving

tractor

 

 

tractor

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                  


ACROSTIC POEM

Jumps on a trampoling

Only have an older brother

Silly and funny

Excited about some fun things

Play with my friends

Happy 

 

 

     Refrain Poem

 

         Dogs

  big little

dogs

playful

dogs

best friend

dogs

cuddly

dogs

 

 

cat

fury

cat

scratches

cat

fun to cuddle with

cat

purr

cat

 

Alliteration poem

 

Billy bought

big brown bowls 

to bake brownies he also bought

 

Sally saw so many silly snails in the sand Saturday

siding on slippery slim

sing the sillyest song

 

 

found poem

 

stop sign

stop

wait untell green

law if past when red

stop sign

 

safe

keeps from crashes

its the law

stop sign

 

stop sign

 

Concrete poem

               eye    

        head

  tdogdogdogdog

              a dogdogdogdog

       i  leg        leg

       l   leg        leg

          leg        leg

 

 

 

Metaphor poem

 

 

going to school was as if going to a torture chamber

and getting stretched

but leaving feels as if I just won the lottery

 

 

 

           

 

 

 

   
   
   
   
   
   
   

 

Comments (13)

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Colby said

at 2:57 pm on May 22, 2009

You're right Joey!! A is awesome!!!

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Leah said

at 10:04 pm on May 22, 2009

nice start joey. oh i get it b is blank!! ha ha joey ur so funny

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Mitchell said

at 11:23 pm on May 22, 2009

c is probably in cognito (incognito is actually one word, but i had to come up with something...)

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Leah said

at 2:52 pm on May 26, 2009

ok so maybe you changed so now my other comment doesn't make sense

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Doug said

at 3:17 pm on May 26, 2009

i liked it very very very goody boy

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Kathleen said

at 3:19 pm on May 26, 2009

Great Job Joey!

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Kalleigh said

at 9:00 pm on May 26, 2009

keep up the great work!

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Corby said

at 10:40 am on May 27, 2009

Good job joey.

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KaitlinO said

at 12:07 pm on May 27, 2009

I really like your poems they had lots of detail!

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Alex said

at 7:56 pm on May 27, 2009

I thought they were realy great poems I realy liked the alliteration poems.

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Dakota said

at 11:54 am on May 28, 2009

T R A M P O L I N E that how you spell trampoline joe,
still awesome though joey

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Kalleigh said

at 6:29 pm on May 28, 2009

Great Job Joey!

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Mrs. K. said

at 1:21 pm on May 29, 2009

Good poems, Joey. I took out the one with your last name, but still gave you points for it.

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