vippoets

 

lorissab

Page history last edited by Lorissa 5 mos ago

             spring

colorful, new born,life

          spring

birds,flowers,wamer

 

 

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Leah said

at 3:04 pm on May 26, 2009

nice start. i like your poem so far. keep up the good work

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Belle said

at 5:00 pm on May 26, 2009

spring is a really pretty poem keep up the good work!

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Kjerstin said

at 11:39 am on May 28, 2009

Get working. I'm sure you'll do great!

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Tomi said

at 11:39 am on May 28, 2009

Great job lorissa your doing good!! :)

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Mrs. K. said

at 9:45 am on Jun 2, 2009

This is a good start, but I was looking for a lot more!

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