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shelbyl

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Refrain:

Forests

Dark, cold, moist

Forests

Wolves howling, owls hooting, leaves rattling

Forests

Scary, creepy, haunted

Forests

Monsters lurking, imagenary creatures hiding

Forests

Crunch, snap, scream

http://www.ece.rutgers.edu/~maparker/GameWorld/Woods/DarkWoods/Woods-DarkWoods.jpg

Forests

Acrostic:

 

Lightning

Enjoyable

Active

Hilarious

Alliteration:

While walking through

the woods I wonder,

how could I walk up on

such a wonder of this world.

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3537/3330391632_6bbf232cae.jpg

Acrostic:

Kind

Amazing

Interesting

Totally in love with pigs

Involved in 4-H

Elegant

Onomatopoeia:

As I sit on the grass,

the wind swishing

in my hair I listen

to all the sounds around me.

The faint, "Tweedle dee dee!"

of a bird and all the animals going,

"Ney! Moo! Woof! Meow!"

Oh, how I love all the

sounds on a farm!

http://www.oca-uk.com/data/gallery_items/lrg/0003/3675.jpg

External Rhyme:

Can you hear the whistle in the wind?

Can you feel your heart beating?

Can you see your life changing?

Can you be what you want to be?

 

Refrain:

Summer

Hot, humid, happy people

Summer

Ice cream, popsicles, ice tea

Summer

Softball, baseball, swimming

Summer

Fairs, carnivals, showing animals

Summer

Kids playing, adults talking, animals enjoying the sun

Summer

Rhyme:

In the woods

I walk

pulling up my hood

while things mock

at me and tease,

breaking sticks and hiding

as I start to feel queasy,

trying to find something to guide me.

Then a low laugh,

 oh how I wish,

I should have stayed home and took a bath.

Next a voice with a lisp,

"Hi there!

It's only me.

not a bear...

Just me."

Then a shadowy creature stepped out,

but only to be my brother

laughing about.

Why do I even bother?

 

Acrostic:

 

Caring

Active 

Young

Luminous

Entertaining

Yen

Clerihew:

I like to write,

but I'm just not that bright.

Some turn out good,

but others just make me want to pull up my hood.

ABC List Poem:

 

ANIMALS INDANGERED IN NORTH AMERICA

Angel Island Mouse

Big Horn Sheep

Central American Tajoir

Delmarva Peninsula Fox Squirrel

El Carrizo Deer Mouse

Florida Bonneted Bat

Gray Wolf

Hualapai Mexican Vole

Island Fox

Jaquarundi

Killer Whale

Lower Keys Marsh Rabbit

Margay

Nelsons Woodrat

Ocelot

Pronghorn

Quokka

Red Wolf

Stellar Sea Lion

Tropical Pocket Gopher

Utah Prairie Dog

Vaquita

West Indian Manatee

X-

Yellow-eyed Penguin

Zempualtepec Vole

Simile:

 

Puppies are sweet as candy,

but can be like a bulldozer.

They have bigger eyes then a Ring-tailed Lemar,

and their bellies are as big as an elephants.

 

Acrostic:

Band is not her favorite subject!

Energetic

Lunatic

Laughing

Eager to help

 

Tutie Frootie

Exotic

Smart for a blond

Silly

Adores Chuckie

 

Kind

Earthy

Nice

Neat

Earlybird

Down to earth person

Yare

Acrostic:

Colorful

Opinionated

Lady

Brainless sometimes

Yoga Pro

 

Acrostic:

Kall

Athletic

Lucky

Loco

Experienced in the art of Kung Fu

Independent

Grapefruit lover!

Healthy

Acrostic:

Keen

Artistic

Talkitive

Humble

Leaving to go to Tennessee

Elated

Eerie

Noisy

Clerihew:

I have a dog,

his name is Hog.

He likes to drool,

but saves it until I'm home from school.

Haiku:

I love animals!

Every kind, except for snakes.

All the others, Yes!!


Haiku's make me puke.

Just kidding Mrs. Krambeer!

They are fun to make.

 

Toothpaste is awesome!

It cleans your teeth and tongue goo.

It is amazing.

External Rhyme:

 

Have you ever had Writer's Block.

Sometimes it's like a ticking clock.

You try to think but nothing has come.

It makes you feel like your so very dumb.

You can't think of anything that you want to write.

So you sit there still trying to see if anything sounds right.

You come up with the most weirdest ideas ever.

But it seems that the chances of you using them are never.

Finally you just give up and write about you Writer's Block.

And your clock has met the final tick tock.

Smart with kids

Has 3 dogs

Always helping others

Uppity

Nebulous (sometimes)

Sister                                                             Student at Coe College

Has too many clothes to wear in a centry         Helps people sometimes

Ain't much of the helping kind                          Evil

Nice when you do what she tells you to do       Expensive

Tall                                                                Not the type who is messy

                                                                     Auible

 

Comments (19)

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Colby said

at 2:58 pm on May 22, 2009

How wonderfully descriptive!!!

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Leah said

at 10:06 pm on May 22, 2009

Your pic is very spooky

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Mitchell said

at 11:14 pm on May 22, 2009

that gave me the goose bumps and was very well written

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Shelby said

at 7:35 pm on May 23, 2009

thanks!!

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Belle said

at 3:40 pm on May 25, 2009

i love your poem it sounds so mysterious plus the picture goes really good with it

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Kennedy said

at 10:55 am on May 26, 2009

I love your poem it is kind of creepy but in a good way because its mysterious like Belle said! And I love how you used pic's! I couldn't get mine to work~

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KatlynG said

at 11:54 am on May 26, 2009

i love you're poem it sound like your actually walking through a forest!!!!

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Leah said

at 2:54 pm on May 26, 2009

ok the lightning thing is so not true because if i traveled the speed of light then you wouldn't be able to see me!!! good poems though anyway!

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Shelby said

at 3:08 pm on May 26, 2009

That was the point you silly goose! Oh and thanks!

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Belle said

at 5:02 pm on May 26, 2009

i really like the external rhyme one it's really cool

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Kalleigh said

at 9:01 pm on May 26, 2009

I love all the detail!

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Kathleen said

at 10:11 am on May 27, 2009

Love Them!...but the forest pic scares me..

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KaitlinO said

at 10:40 am on May 27, 2009

I your poems they are really cool. I really like the Kaitie poem!!!!!

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Tessa said

at 10:44 am on May 27, 2009

i love them a! But wheres the one about me? haha

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Tessa said

at 10:45 am on May 27, 2009

i love them all***

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Kennedy said

at 10:46 am on May 27, 2009

Your poems are AMAZING Shelbs!! I wish I could write like that, they have great feeling and i especially like the one about the woods it has great suspense!!

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Courtney said

at 6:41 pm on May 27, 2009

Good job i love all the poems

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Kalleigh said

at 6:31 pm on May 28, 2009

♥ all of your poems!

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Mrs. K. said

at 1:23 pm on May 29, 2009

Good poems! You weren't afraid to try out a bunch of different forms and devices. Nice work.

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