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Hurdles

Freeverse

I start out,

bursting out of the blocks,

my heart is racing

getting ready to leap

I can’t wait to glide over,

my anticipation is rising,

the first hurdle is conquered now onto the next,

I try to four step,

but need one more step,

I collide with the hurdle,

I went to fast,

get right back up I tell myself,

 

Time to try again and this time with six,

I glide over smoothly a few more to go,

one more down without a catch.

Just one more hurdle,

and then I’m in the home stretch.

I go up wrong,

an instant collide.

I hop right up,

and sprint in.

My neighbor and I,

are neck to neck.

she trips on her shoe,

now I’ve got her beat,

I step over the line,

and she’s a foot behind.

I’ve won.

 

 

 

 

Leave me alone

Concrete picture form

 

Now leave my be

because I've been treated

as merely a flea so let me be,

like I'm not worth your time

I'm as good as old air,

and if you want me back

I'm not going there

I wasn’t the focus

it was only she

Just let me go

so I can be me.

I’m happier now

as good as can be

and it’s better not being

merely a flea now leave me be

not a waste of your time

or simply my own

it’s kind of nice

 being alone

 

 

Jocelyn K

AABB

 

My name is Jocelyn K,

and I am quite crazy.

I have short hair,

with some flare,

I have blue eyes.

and pretty skies,.

My hair is blond,

but I don't like James Bond.

I like blue,

which is quite new.

 

Haiku



I'm a little tree

as happy as can be

  It’s good to be me

 

 

Anchor

Freeverse

Just like an anchor

you once held me down,

now I am flying way above ground

Just like a bird as free as can be  

I’m as happy to just be me

Attitude

Acrostic

 

Actions

Teaching

Tasks

Independence

Truly

Unique

Defining

Extraordinarily

 

Elephant

ABC Poem

 

All

boys

can

drive

elephants

for

girls

helping

iguanas

jump.

 

Band

freeverse

Flutes

Trumpets

clarinets too

Lower brass

saxophones

and  percussion too

 

Swim

Acrostic


Special

Wings

Included

Mostly for fun

Lunch 

acrostic

Lunch time

Unique

Nice

Cool

Hour

 




 

Comments (15)

Trenten M said

at 8:51 am on May 21, 2015

I like your AABB poem because it discribes you

BrianneR said

at 8:54 am on May 21, 2015

I like the hurdles poem because it shows how much fun and hard work you have and put into them.

Natasha G. said

at 8:56 am on May 21, 2015

I like Leave Me Alone because you showed alot of angry that you wanted to be alone.

Pauline C said

at 8:59 am on May 21, 2015

I like the poem leave me along, it showed that you are done with taking all the hurt and pain

Megan K said

at 9:04 am on May 21, 2015

I liked the hurdles poem, because you had accepted that you made a mistake, but you just kept going.

EveHJ said

at 9:13 am on May 21, 2015

I like your poem called now leave me be it totally shows how you feel about things like how nothing will leave you alone.

Joey S. said

at 9:16 am on May 21, 2015

I like your Haiku because I really love to read haikus and its really cool.

Levi L. said

at 9:36 am on May 21, 2015

I like how you ryhmed in your poems

Stryker L. said

at 9:40 am on May 21, 2015

I like the flying one because it shows that people can't anchor you down

Tanner G said

at 9:43 am on May 21, 2015

I like the hurdles because it makes me feel like I was there

Mady T. said

at 9:54 am on May 21, 2015

I like the attitude poem. It's very free. I really can relate to that poem. Good job Jocelyn!

Sage M said

at 12:37 pm on May 21, 2015

"Leave me alone" is so sad and touching. Great job!

Lexi R said

at 8:52 am on May 22, 2015

I like the poem about you because real does explain you!

Tracy H said

at 8:56 am on May 22, 2015

I like the leave me alone one because it describes how you feel about that.

Dylan B said

at 9:25 am on May 22, 2015

I like your lunch one

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