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Mushroom Hunting - Cinquain Poem

By Payten L

challenging, rewarding

searching, discovering, pleasure

ticks, dead elm trees

Morels

 

 

The Game - Freestyle Poem

By Payten L

20-19

One last point will win it all.

The ball flying through the air towards us.

Tense and exhilarating

feelings are all around.

Energy pulsing through

our veins.

We bump the ball,

then set,

then spike.

The ball hits their floor.

21-19

 

 

Cats and Dogs - Acrostic Poem

By Payten L

 

Curious

Affectionate

Temperamental

Sneaky

 

Devoted

Outgoing

Gentle

Smart

 

 

Summer and Winter - Diamante Poem

By Payten L

Summer

exciting, hot

swimming, biking, relaxing

fun, adventurous, pleasing, relieving

freezing, snowing, beautifying

cold, white

Winter

 

 

The Beefy Caterpillar - ABC Poem

By Payten L

 

A

Beefy

Caterpillar

Danced on

Exotic

Flowers

Granting

Happiness for all

Insects,

Jungle Kangaroos,

Koalas,

Lemurs,

Macaws,

Nilgais,

Otters,

Platypuses,

Quails,

Raccoons,

Sambars,

Turtles,

Urials,

Vipers,

Wallabys,

X-Ray Tetras,

Yacks, &

Zebras.

 

 

Fire and Ice - Diamante Poem

By Payten L

Fire

hot, explosive

blazing, dancing, glowing

energetic, fuel, sparks, warmth

mystifying, freezing, calming

majestic, delicate

Ice

 

 

Special Unitato - Wingspark Poem

By Payten L

 

I dreamed

a very special unitato*

lived in a sky castle

sprinkling people below

with his glitter.

*Unitato (you-ni-tay-toe) Half potato, half unicorn

 

 

Nature Haiku

By Payten L

Trees swaying slowly,

the wind whispering gently,

the crisp, fresh, clean air.

 

 

Swimming - Small Moment Poem

By Payten L

He pushes through the clear water

into the the depths.

His breath turned into bubbles,

then disappearing.

He opened his eyes,

and the cold, salty water

overlaid his vision,

turning everything blurry.

Deeper and deeper he went,

until his lungs could take no longer.

He pushed off the bottom,

exploding out of the water,

sighing with the relief of air.

 

 

Family - Acrostic Poem

By Payten L

Friendly

Absolute

Magnificent

Important

Loving

Youthful

 

 

Ice cream - Concrete Poem

By Payten L

 

chocolatechocola

techocolatechocolatech

ocolatechocolatechocolatec

hocolatechocolatechocolatecho

colatechocolatechocolatechoco

latechocolatechocolatechoc

olatechocolatechocolate

chocolatechocola

strawberrystrawb

errystrawberrystrawberr

ystrawberrystrawberrystraw

berrystrawberrystrawberrystra

wberrystrawberrystrawberryst

rawberrystrawberrystrawbe

rrystrawberrystrawberry

strawberrystrawb

mintmintmintmint

mintmintmintmintmintmin

tmintmintmintmintmintmintm

intmintmintmintmintmintmintmin

tmintmintmintmintmintmintmintm

intmintmintmintmintmintmintm

intmintmintmintmintmintm

intmintmintmintmin

coneconeconeconeconeconeconeco

coneconeconeconeconeconecon

coneconeconeconeconecone

coneconeconeconeconec

coneconeconeconeco

coneconeconecone

coneconeconeco

coneconecone

coneconeco

conecone

coneco

cone

co

 

 

PB&J- Concrete Poem

By Payten L

 

BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread

BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread

BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread

JellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJelly

JellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJelly

PeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButter

PeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButter

BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread

BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread

BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread

 

 

Barrel Hi-Boy - Concrete Poem

By Payten L

 

bunbunbunbunbunbunbun

bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun

bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun

bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun

tomatotomatotomatotomatotomatotomatotomato

cheesecheesecheesecheesecheesecheesecheese

burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger

burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger

secretsaucesecretsaucesecretsaucesecretsauce

lettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettuce

bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun

bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun

lettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettuce

secretsaucesecretsaucesecretsaucesecretsauce

burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger

burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger

bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun

bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun

 

 

Comments (23)

Pauline C said

at 9:24 am on May 21, 2015

I really like your poem about the Unitato, I think that it was cool how you added a definition of what a Unitato is.

Megan K said

at 9:34 am on May 21, 2015

I thought that your ice cream poem was really unique, because it shows some of the different kinds of poems there are.

Sage M said

at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015

Awesome job! I like how much work and perseverance you put into your concrete/picture poems!

austin K said

at 10:22 am on May 21, 2015

I liked the ice cream one because Ice cream sounds really good right now. It also looks awesome the way you made it.

KarleeC said

at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015

I really liked the way you explained how you feel in your poem The Game.

Mia g said

at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015

Great job! I like all your concrete poems because they look realistic and you spent a lot of time on them.

ashia g said

at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015

I like your ice cream poem beacuse I love icecream and those are my favrite flavors.

Austin M. said

at 10:26 am on May 21, 2015

I like how you did your burger poem you don't tell what one ingredient is .

Kenny G. said

at 10:27 am on May 21, 2015

I like your Cats and Dogs poem A lot. You did a good job describing the way most act.

Joel G said

at 10:28 am on May 21, 2015

I like your ice cream poem because it has many different flavors and it looks like an ice cream cone.

Lilly M said

at 10:31 am on May 21, 2015

i really liked you summer and winter poem it is so true!

Mike B said

at 12:01 pm on May 21, 2015

I really liked your food poems! Makes me so hungry!

Emily J. said

at 12:03 pm on May 21, 2015

I like all of your food poems because they resemble the real food item

Leinissa T said

at 12:04 pm on May 21, 2015

I like The Game poem. It relates me when i was Volleyball and I also like the action.

Trey D said

at 12:14 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your "Barrel Hi-Boy" poem because it looks good and that is by far the best thing at the barrel.

Tristen M said

at 12:16 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your ice cream one because i want ice cream.

Macoy b said

at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the ice cream poem it looks tastey

Dylan D said

at 12:20 pm on May 21, 2015

I really like the "Unitato" poem because there are so awesome!

Brady F said

at 12:21 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the PB&J poem because they are cool.

Chloe Ga said

at 1:57 pm on May 21, 2015

I like 'The Beefy Caterpillar' because I thought it was funny. nice job on all of you poems

Taylor N said

at 2:01 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked your poem "The Beefy Caterpillar" because it was amusing. Great job!

Claire H said

at 9:22 am on May 22, 2015

I liked "Ice Cream" the best because you did a really good job of making it look like actual ice cream and put all my favorite flavors on it!

Kendra T said

at 10:18 am on May 22, 2015

I like "Swimming" because you can get that feeling of being under water.

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