Mushroom Hunting - Cinquain Poem
By Payten L
challenging, rewarding
searching, discovering, pleasure
ticks, dead elm trees
Morels
The Game - Freestyle Poem
By Payten L
20-19
One last point will win it all.
The ball flying through the air towards us.
Tense and exhilarating
feelings are all around.
Energy pulsing through
our veins.
We bump the ball,
then set,
then spike.
The ball hits their floor.
21-19
Cats and Dogs - Acrostic Poem
By Payten L
Curious
Affectionate
Temperamental
Sneaky
Devoted
Outgoing
Gentle
Smart
Summer and Winter - Diamante Poem
By Payten L
Summer
exciting, hot
swimming, biking, relaxing
fun, adventurous, pleasing, relieving
freezing, snowing, beautifying
cold, white
Winter
The Beefy Caterpillar - ABC Poem
By Payten L
A
Beefy
Caterpillar
Danced on
Exotic
Flowers
Granting
Happiness for all
Insects,
Jungle Kangaroos,
Koalas,
Lemurs,
Macaws,
Nilgais,
Otters,
Platypuses,
Quails,
Raccoons,
Sambars,
Turtles,
Urials,
Vipers,
Wallabys,
X-Ray Tetras,
Yacks, &
Zebras.
Fire and Ice - Diamante Poem
By Payten L
Fire
hot, explosive
blazing, dancing, glowing
energetic, fuel, sparks, warmth
mystifying, freezing, calming
majestic, delicate
Ice
Special Unitato - Wingspark Poem
By Payten L
I dreamed
a very special unitato*
lived in a sky castle
sprinkling people below
with his glitter.
*Unitato (you-ni-tay-toe) Half potato, half unicorn
Nature Haiku
By Payten L
Trees swaying slowly,
the wind whispering gently,
the crisp, fresh, clean air.
Swimming - Small Moment Poem
By Payten L
He pushes through the clear water
into the the depths.
His breath turned into bubbles,
then disappearing.
He opened his eyes,
and the cold, salty water
overlaid his vision,
turning everything blurry.
Deeper and deeper he went,
until his lungs could take no longer.
He pushed off the bottom,
exploding out of the water,
sighing with the relief of air.
Family - Acrostic Poem
By Payten L
Friendly
Absolute
Magnificent
Important
Loving
Youthful
Ice cream - Concrete Poem
By Payten L
chocolatechocola
techocolatechocolatech
ocolatechocolatechocolatec
hocolatechocolatechocolatecho
colatechocolatechocolatechoco
latechocolatechocolatechoc
olatechocolatechocolate
chocolatechocola
strawberrystrawb
errystrawberrystrawberr
ystrawberrystrawberrystraw
berrystrawberrystrawberrystra
wberrystrawberrystrawberryst
rawberrystrawberrystrawbe
rrystrawberrystrawberry
strawberrystrawb
mintmintmintmint
mintmintmintmintmintmin
tmintmintmintmintmintmintm
intmintmintmintmintmintmintmin
tmintmintmintmintmintmintmintm
intmintmintmintmintmintmintm
intmintmintmintmintmintm
intmintmintmintmin
coneconeconeconeconeconeconeco
coneconeconeconeconeconecon
coneconeconeconeconecone
coneconeconeconeconec
coneconeconeconeco
coneconeconecone
coneconeconeco
coneconecone
coneconeco
conecone
coneco
cone
co
PB&J- Concrete Poem
By Payten L
BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread
BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread
BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread
JellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJelly
JellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJellyJelly
PeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButter
PeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButterPeanutButter
BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread
BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread
BreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBreadBread
Barrel Hi-Boy - Concrete Poem
By Payten L
bunbunbunbunbunbunbun
bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun
bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun
bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun
tomatotomatotomatotomatotomatotomatotomato
cheesecheesecheesecheesecheesecheesecheese
burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger
burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger
secretsaucesecretsaucesecretsaucesecretsauce
lettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettuce
bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun
bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun
lettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettucelettuce
secretsaucesecretsaucesecretsaucesecretsauce
burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger
burgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburgerburger
bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun
bunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbunbun
Comments (23)
Pauline C said
at 9:24 am on May 21, 2015
I really like your poem about the Unitato, I think that it was cool how you added a definition of what a Unitato is.
Megan K said
at 9:34 am on May 21, 2015
I thought that your ice cream poem was really unique, because it shows some of the different kinds of poems there are.
Sage M said
at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015
Awesome job! I like how much work and perseverance you put into your concrete/picture poems!
austin K said
at 10:22 am on May 21, 2015
I liked the ice cream one because Ice cream sounds really good right now. It also looks awesome the way you made it.
KarleeC said
at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015
I really liked the way you explained how you feel in your poem The Game.
Mia g said
at 10:23 am on May 21, 2015
Great job! I like all your concrete poems because they look realistic and you spent a lot of time on them.
ashia g said
at 10:25 am on May 21, 2015
I like your ice cream poem beacuse I love icecream and those are my favrite flavors.
Austin M. said
at 10:26 am on May 21, 2015
I like how you did your burger poem you don't tell what one ingredient is .
Kenny G. said
at 10:27 am on May 21, 2015
I like your Cats and Dogs poem A lot. You did a good job describing the way most act.
Joel G said
at 10:28 am on May 21, 2015
I like your ice cream poem because it has many different flavors and it looks like an ice cream cone.
Lilly M said
at 10:31 am on May 21, 2015
i really liked you summer and winter poem it is so true!
Mike B said
at 12:01 pm on May 21, 2015
I really liked your food poems! Makes me so hungry!
Emily J. said
at 12:03 pm on May 21, 2015
I like all of your food poems because they resemble the real food item
Leinissa T said
at 12:04 pm on May 21, 2015
I like The Game poem. It relates me when i was Volleyball and I also like the action.
Trey D said
at 12:14 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your "Barrel Hi-Boy" poem because it looks good and that is by far the best thing at the barrel.
Tristen M said
at 12:16 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your ice cream one because i want ice cream.
Macoy b said
at 12:17 pm on May 21, 2015
I like the ice cream poem it looks tastey
Dylan D said
at 12:20 pm on May 21, 2015
I really like the "Unitato" poem because there are so awesome!
Brady F said
at 12:21 pm on May 21, 2015
I like the PB&J poem because they are cool.
Chloe Ga said
at 1:57 pm on May 21, 2015
I like 'The Beefy Caterpillar' because I thought it was funny. nice job on all of you poems
Taylor N said
at 2:01 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked your poem "The Beefy Caterpillar" because it was amusing. Great job!
Claire H said
at 9:22 am on May 22, 2015
I liked "Ice Cream" the best because you did a really good job of making it look like actual ice cream and put all my favorite flavors on it!
Kendra T said
at 10:18 am on May 22, 2015
I like "Swimming" because you can get that feeling of being under water.
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