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JoelG

Page history last edited by Joel G 9 years, 4 months ago

            FOOD

         Cinquain

           Food

    Tasty, Delicious

    Chewing, Eating, Tasting

    Happy, Hungry, Stuffed, Full

       Nourishment

Bill and Phil 

Limerick

There once was a guy named Bill

He had an enemy named Phil

They did not want to fight

but then one night

Bill pushed Phil down a hill

 

Small moment Free verse

Takedown

The ref signals for a handshake, and the whistle blows.

Adrenaline pours through muscles and bones until the sweat pours down my face.

I set up the shot and take it. I explode through my opponent to get the two points.

I have the takedown, and now I can’t let him stand up. I break him down to his stomach and try to turn him to his back. I get a turn and drive through him. As tired as I am I keep going.

I put him to his back and get the pin.

I have a smile on my face as the ref raises my hand.

 

poem Free verse

Zebras are hungry

very hungry

very very hungry

they eat a lot

a lot a lot

then they get fat

very fat

then they explode

explode into a million pieces

a million

then I eat them

eat them

they taste good

very good

now i'm fat

very fat

the end

 

Acrostic poem

Wrestling

Running

Exercise

Sleep

Train

Love the sport

Intelligence

Never give up Go as hard as you can

 

          Wrestling 

         Cinquain

        Wrestling

       Sport, Physical

Takedown, Pin, Technique

     The best sport ever

         Competing

 

 

        Wrestling is better 

           Dynamite 

        Wrestling

         Sport, technical  

   Competing, winning, Losing

   Cradle, Spladle, Dumb, pansy-sport

    Walking, Shooting, Fouling

    Complaining, Whining

              Basketball  

 

My dream

wingspark

I dreamed

that Joel tried to punch me

at my house

But i punched him

and he fell down and never got back up

 

 

Tristen 

Clerihew

Tristen

has a piston

on his car

that goes real far

 

The kite 

Limerick

I flew my kite

All that night

then my dad

was very sad

so I had to ask him is he's alright.

 

 

Comments (21)

Brennan I said

at 1:14 pm on May 20, 2015

I like the one MY DREAM it is cool about beating yourself up.

Camille H said

at 11:58 am on May 21, 2015

I like the "Zebra Fat" one because it's hilarious and detailed, and they explode because they are too fat.

Brady F said

at 12:03 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the Bill and Phil because not many people did a limerick.

Macoy b said

at 12:04 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the food one it makes me hungry

Dylan D said

at 12:05 pm on May 21, 2015

I really like the food one because you always wanna eat, and because it makes me hungry!

Trey D said

at 12:06 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the food one because your always hungry.

Tristen M said

at 12:09 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the Tristen one because you wrote it about a car.

Mike B said

at 12:10 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked your dream poem, its do funny.

Payten L said

at 12:14 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked your free verse poem about the zebra because I think it's interesting when the zebra blew up and you ate it. It is very imaginative and creates a realistic picture inside my head.

KarleeC said

at 12:16 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the poem about the zebra because you used the same ending words to start the next line.

Emily J. said

at 12:18 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your food poem because its true

ashia g said

at 12:20 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your my dream poem it is so funny that you used you self punching you.

Lilly M said

at 12:20 pm on May 21, 2015

i liker you bill and phil one because of the rhyme scheme

Austin M. said

at 12:20 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your food poem because it describes food.

Sage M said

at 12:23 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the "I dreamed' poem, because it reminds me of a book I read where a person beat herself up in a dream.

Mia g said

at 12:25 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your food poem because food is delicious. Great job!

austin K said

at 12:32 pm on May 21, 2015

I liked the food one because it made me hungery.

Kenny G. said

at 3:18 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your "Joel" poem, because it shows self hurt and conquering it.

Mady T. said

at 9:04 am on May 22, 2015

I like your dream poem. It's pretty funny.

Claire H said

at 9:37 am on May 22, 2015

I liked your Clerihew poem because it had clever word play involved.

Leinissa T said

at 10:11 pm on May 22, 2015

I like your poem Free verse, I like when you repeat the words again. And it was very funny.

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