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Page history last edited by Brady F 7 years, 6 months ago

 

The First Game.   Rhyme scheme

 

It was the first game.

It wouldn’t be the same.

This was not basketball.

This was football.

There was that one second.

And I said “Guys chill for a second.”

We were now on the line.

I knew we would be fine.

We were off, I ran to the end of the field.

Then I yield.

Then the ball was near.

I was clear.

I caught it and I was near to the touchdown.

There was no more countdown.

I ran as fast as I can.

I was the front man.

I was in the zone.

The endzone.

 

Bad day   Free verse

 

As I sit here in school.

It is so cruel.

I look out the window and think.

All the things I could do if I was a good kid in school.

I see all the kids run and play.

Good thing it a rainy day.

 

My Rude Teacher.   Free verse

 

My teacher is so rude.

She is almost worst than the devil's food.

She tries to flunk me.

Like I’m a little punk.

But I’m not having it.

So I will stay legit.

She tests us over things we haven’t learned yet.

We all try not to get upset.

If she wasn’t so cruel.

I might like school.

 

My Dog   Rhyme scheme

 

I have a dog.

Who act like a hog.

It likes spaghetti.

and chops it up with a machete.

His name is Fred.

I gave him a huge bed.

But he likes to nap.

Next to my baseball cap.

 

Kewl   Acrostic Poem

 

 

Kewl

Eggcelent

Working

Loung

 

Brady Free verse

 

I DREAMED THAT BRADY RODE MY BUS.

THEN HE KICKED ME.

BUT REALLY BRADY RODE HIS BUS.

AND I BEAT HIM UP.

 

Punny   Free verse

 

My puns are punny then yours

I’m not kitten around right meow.

I'm not yoking they can be cereal or eggcellent.


Hungry Free verse

Are you hungry

I can go to the fridge and get some turkey.

There's norway. It might be greeced up.

 

Mike   Rhyme scheme

 

There's a kid named Mike

He has a nice bike

He sometimes gets in fights

Which makes alright.

So good night.

 

The boy Macoy   Rhyme scheme

 

Theres a boy

Named Macoy

Everybody jumps for joy

Because he's from Illinois

He also annoy’s

Little kids so thats why we jump for joy

 

 



 

 

Comments (22)

Brennan I said

at 1:10 pm on May 20, 2015

I like the one about Kewl. It is your own special language that you use.

Brady F said

at 9:52 am on May 21, 2015

Good job Brady I like the puns there good.

Austin M. said

at 10:01 am on May 21, 2015

I like the football poem it really got me interested.

Emily J. said

at 10:03 am on May 21, 2015

I like the punny poem because it is really funny and you puns are good.

Tristen M said

at 10:04 am on May 21, 2015

I like the one about Kewl because it is about yor language that you made.

ashia g said

at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015

I like the rude teacher. You try not to get mad when they test you over stuff you don't know.

Payten L said

at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015

I really like your My Dog Rhyme Scheme poem. It's funny because of the good rhyme scheme words you have. Great job.

Mia g said

at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015

Great job! I like your style of rhyming and the words you pick.

Camille H said

at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015

I really really like "My Rude Teacher" it reminds me of a specific teacher. I like the way you wrote it out, but it's not free verse it's Rhyme Scheme. I really enjoyed it it made me laugh really hard in my head, good job.

Mike B said

at 10:05 am on May 21, 2015

I like your punny poem because its funny and rhymed.

Joel G said

at 10:06 am on May 21, 2015

I like how all of your poems rhyme and make sense when they rhyme.

Dylan D said

at 10:07 am on May 21, 2015

Nice Job! I like the Rhyme Scheme poems! Especially about the Dog!

Kenny G. said

at 10:10 am on May 21, 2015

I like your "Punny" poem because it seems like you use those ALL THE TIME!!! I'm glad you put them to a good use.

austin K said

at 10:11 am on May 21, 2015

I liked the football game one because we once had a game against Jesup and the reffs blew the whistle and we stopped but the otherr team kept going. They scored and that's how they beat us. I had the same thing happen but it was bad for our team.

Kendra T said

at 10:13 am on May 21, 2015

I like the style of your poems, and your choice of words and rhyming.

Lilly M said

at 10:15 am on May 21, 2015

I really liked the "hungry" one i loved the way you used countries to make a poem!!

Sage M said

at 10:21 am on May 21, 2015

Magnificent job! I liked your poem "Punny", and all the puns overflowing from it.

Trey D said

at 10:30 am on May 21, 2015

I like your first poem because of the style of it and the ryhmes.

KarleeC said

at 12:11 pm on May 21, 2015

I like your hungry poem because of the way you used countries.

Macoy b said

at 12:15 pm on May 21, 2015

I like the rude teacher poem it really explains

Claire H said

at 9:14 am on May 22, 2015

I really like your poem titled The First Game. It was really clever rhyme scheme that was very entertaining and well written.

Leinissa T said

at 9:41 pm on May 22, 2015

I like the the First Game poem, i like when you describe your action of what your doing.

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