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I Could've Done Better Free Verse Sports Poem
Its my turn up to bat
my teammates say “good luck” as I walk out of the dugout
nervously,
I walk to the batter’s box
do a few practice swings
I look at the pitcher
nodding
I step up to the plate
ready
hands sweaty
staring at the pitcher's glove
knowing my team
is counting on me
9 to 9 is the score
1 inning left
I grip the bat
she throws the ball
I swing,
but miss
I step back
my team says
“you got this”
I can’t miss
she pitches again
I swing
the ball goes towards first
I sprint
I’m not going to make it
she catches the ball
I jog back
thinking I’ve let my team down
I could’ve done better |
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Friday ABC Poem
Alex
Buys a
Can of
Dill pickles
Every Friday
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Skipping Wingspark
I dreamed
that Rebecca
skipped
to my house, from hers
and she was very hyper |
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Asleep Diamante
Asleep
peaceful, quiet
dreaming, snoring, laying
nap, hibernate, doze, rest
knowing, seeing, living, breathing
alive, aware
Awake |
Softball Cinquain
Softball
tiring, amazing
batting, running, playing
sweaty, tired, anxious, nervous
Baseball |
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Taylor Moore Clerihew
Taylor Moore
knocked on my door
she brought a cake
for me to bake |
Anna Kelly Free Verse
Anna Kelly
went to the deli
to get some jelly
to make some pie
before her cat died
and her dog went to hide
because he was scared
and nobody cared
but the neighbor just stared |
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Riding My Bike Small Moment
On my bike
riding down the street
there’s a cat
selling popcorn
and a boy
eating a worm
his mom
is planting flowers
his dad
is mowing the lawn
the dog
is chasing a squirrel
the ant
is carrying a leaf
i hit a rock
now my bike fell over
and so did i
i cut my knee. |
Study Hall List Poem
Megan is laughing
Taylor is dancing
Stryker is helping
Zander is listening
Joey is reading
Chloe is writing
We are working |
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Comments (24)
Brennan I said
at 3:23 pm on May 20, 2015
Good job coming up with all the words for the asleep poem.
EveHJ said
at 9:33 am on May 21, 2015
God job on the asleep Diamante because it relates to everyone since we all live awake and asleep, I like all of your poems actually they all are incredibly inspirational and connective.
Mike B said
at 12:19 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked your abc poems because i just did! Idk why though.
Mike B said
at 12:34 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked your softball poem!
Moises C. said
at 1:09 pm on May 21, 2015
The Anna Kelly one has good rhymes and the cat added a good touch to it.
Sam W said
at 1:14 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your poem Friday because pickles are really good.
Chloe Ga said
at 1:14 pm on May 21, 2015
I like the one about Rebecca skipping to your house. I thought it was funny.
Weller C said
at 1:15 pm on May 21, 2015
You study hall poem was very interesting, sounds like a fun study hall.
Gina G said
at 1:16 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your Riding My Bike one because of how it said a cat was selling popcorn.
Hannah V said
at 1:19 pm on May 21, 2015
Study Hall: I like that poem because it keeps it at a fast paste, and it is usually what is happening in Study Hall.
Zander B said
at 1:26 pm on May 21, 2015
I enjoyed the Ride my bike poem, it gave a great image, and the spacing made me slow down good Job!
Taylor N said
at 1:32 pm on May 21, 2015
I enjoyed your poem "I Could've Done Better" because I hate the feeling of letting your team down.
Ezra S said
at 1:34 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your study hall poem. I like the way you explain what everybody is doing.
Miranda J said
at 1:45 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your study hall poem, everyone is working on something.
Rebecca F. said
at 1:48 pm on May 21, 2015
I like you "Riding my Bike Poem" because it made me laugh.
Ian M. said
at 1:53 pm on May 21, 2015
I liked the one about friday because I thought it was amusing.
Kaylin K-T said
at 1:54 pm on May 21, 2015
I like your poem "Rebecca", it was funny, and I had a visual.
Dylan F said
at 1:57 pm on May 21, 2015
Riding my bike is a funny poem
Brinna E. said
at 9:02 am on May 22, 2015
I liked your skipping poem because "Rebecca probably would.
Julie M said
at 12:50 pm on May 22, 2015
I liked your "I Could've Done Better" poem because you put a lot of meaning into it.
Jade O said
at 1:06 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your poem asleep because I like sleeping and the words you used.
Morganne M said
at 1:08 pm on May 22, 2015
I like your study hall poem, because I have study hall with you and it's very true most of the time.
Cassi M said
at 1:33 pm on May 25, 2015
Chloe, all of your poem were great and I was happy with how you came up with different topics then what some people wrote theres about
Seth M said
at 9:56 am on May 26, 2015
I like your Friday Abc poem because it is funny
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